Today's goal

I identified what was off: my reader (one of many "me's" that is working on story, i love that i can be schizophrenic) is not buying the whole "let's just wander around and get in trouble and everyone else.  the place is way too fortified.

I need to:

~increase character motivation to take the risk/go in there [so that anyone would make same decision]  UPDATE: DONE

~increase payoff once they're in there [so that something was earned instead of being a dumb decision through and through].  UPDATE: DONE

Today:

~update scenes with above changes/or more likely, add notes UPDATE: DONE

~get my 250 words  UPDATE: DONE

I have until 9pm to do it so that is a nice cushion of time too :)