Can't seem to get in the head of my next two antagonists. They need to carry on a conversation while MC is hiding.
* Conversation needs to be real (not an "as you know, bob" conversation).
* They need to have a reason to meet in that room. So location needs to be important for the conversation.
* There needs to be a reason why they are meeting in secret.
Why are they there? What did they need to tell each other?
What secrets would they naturally reveal? And why is this a secret meeting? What are they hiding from everyone else?
Why are they working together?
YUP, it's settled. I do not like reveal scenes. they are clunky and it's hard to decide what should be revealed and what's natural and keep track of who knows what and who suspects what.
gah.
yuck
250 words, 250 words. I can do that at least, can't I?
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