So the scene is solid but a little creepy [i know my actual first readers will not like that].  and not quite right. Not sure whether it's the "liveable" not right or the "pull story off-course" not right. It's tied in with a whole plot thread that I am unsure about.  And of course, because I have kept it thus far, scenes keep building on that understanding, as per "duh" it gets more and more difficult to remove.  This is where the benefit of an actual first reader would come in handy.  

Scene is also short.  I added 686 words so far tonight, all in that scene.  So I will need to figure out what's next to complete my goals for today.  

Actually I only need 64 more words.  I suppose I can make that happen fairly quickly.