You wouldn't think 304 words would be a big deal.
So my solution to the acquaintance issue: lower the risk so that he would choose to help them. he now helps them with a chuckle. it's no big deal because all the good stuff is locked up. [PROBLEM SOLVED and SCENE]
now on to the other issue. Where do they run into the minor antagonist and why does he help them?
i shall put that off for tomorrow.
new word count is 74,019
scenes to go: about 25
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