well that did not go smoothly. The scene is just wrong: tone, execution, dialogue. whatever, "wrong" sums it up.
tomorrow will be better? I hope so.
My fear is that whenever I set a deadline, maybe I actually fail on purpose. And this deadline is really important to me.
On the bright side, at some point I will look back at this scene and actually like the scene and how it turned out and what happened in it. It sounds weird. Right now I am not interested in this scene, or rather the sentence by sentence process of moving the plot forward through this scene. I don't want to bother. But I love my MC: "She shook her head, wiped the back of her hand across her leaky, betraying eyes, and sniffed loudly." She's such a cute little endearing kid. I just want to give her a big hug.
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