Thursday, March 25, 2010

THE Sentence

Laptop died. I used the time to brainstorm. Now laptop is back and I have the sticky plot points figured. But something's wrong.

I added a note to self on previous scene of the piece that needs to be added.
I corrected the other/in-process scene.
but something's not right.

possibly it's just the time off. muse is still on holiday. not sure.
i'll try the 2 hour route. typically she gets bored enough to show up and contribute.

the issue still is that i'm not interested in the next few scenes. and i have no idea how to setup the next crucial scene. cause MC is not interested in playing along with the other girls' plan and she has to for next scene to happen. so there must be something else going on here.

also what is my sentence? i need to put time in to that.

i didn't actually think it would be this hard.

wow, that sentence could suck up a lot of my time. shelving for later...

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