stuck! i think i'm just bored. the imaginary reader in my head is bored too. gah.
well, anyway, i need to rewrite the last scene because my fresh eyes have noticed that no one is acting right. they would not just leave MC to find her own way. they'd take her personally. but it's just so boring! it's a repeat of the earlier leading of her by the other character and the hand off. snooze.
so instead. I will add some more characters to my previous scene. duh. why didn't I think of that before?? she needs to interact with other kids and it was weird that they didn't show up before.
unfortunately it does mean that I will have to pretty much rewrite yesterday's work (only about 200 words anyway). but it will make more sense and allow MC to see her friends again.
mystery solved and my flagging interest gets an upswing.. [there just ain't nothing to see/that i want her to see so 'no good' verdict was inevitable. Muse is SO smart sometimes! i should listen to her more often.]
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