What happens next?

I HAVE NO IDEA.

Gah. This is horrible!

Work was terrible and no time to figure out this troublesome sub plot. I feel like just dumping it/pretending it never was. But it would pull a lot of loose ends together if I can finally figure this out.

It feels like one of those simple plot points too. There's just not all that much to it so why am I having so much trouble figuring out. It goes back to the antagonist problem. I just cannot figure them out. Which means I am trying to fit the story into the scenes I already wrote. And it just ain't gonna happen.

So I need to replot and give up some stuff I like.

Wah.

This is NOT any fun. I don't like plotting.

Oh and other problem. The scene I wrote last night: the voices are too childish. Yick. don't like that either.

So There's my goal for today and not enough time to do it.

I need to forget about word count tonight (wah)
Focus on figuring out what the hell my antagonist is up to. what in hell all the protag groups are up to. and how they all intersect to create my previous scenes and future scenes. And, please oh please, slash out all the trash.

Simple enough?


And, yes, I have done this over and over again and I simply cannot figure this crap out. What the hell?