Here's the main problem: I don't know how it should go. How people would act. How he would carry out his assignment. If there's anyone who believes that people would have handled the situation the way the bad guys have.
that's what's bothering me. It makes no sense. If you have rules setup to prevent information leaks, you don't let a girl run around ANYWHERE until you are safe from that person releasing that information.
A security risk like her would never have been allowed in that situation if it was in their power to prevent it.
how do I fix that? I see no way out right now.
UPDATE:
so yeah, just want to write this out because it just strikes me as so odd. This will be fixed too. The amount of times I have been stuck with a hopeless scene. and it magically fits once I've thrown enough stuff at all. Although re-reading shows how much more is left to be ironed out but still, I am feeling SO down in the dumps. It's so amazing to think that one day I will be through even this scene.
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