~Rewrite scene, either with different character. Or, MUCH, MUCH preferred, keep character but smooth out and change the way it went. read as: character should behave in a way that fits their personality.
Note: I shall keep original version to look back on later cause too funny.
~I don't care about word count, I just want to fix the scene above
~If I have time, I would like to get a hook into my next scene. Either decide to skip ahead a week or figure out what is the conflict for the breakfast scene.
UPDATE: and, oh whine, see previous blog entry back end of August when I talk about this habit of mine of quiting when times get tough. I called it. grrr. I called it. and there's no excuse. How will I ever finish if I keep to these fits and starts?
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