It looks like.
I need to rewrite my MC. Make her interesting, funny, endearing.
Hmmm.
that is tall order and I'm all frozen.
I come here to pout and to set my mind straight.
It's okay if it's not quite right; I just need to make a dent with it.
Also, what is it with people sometimes? They can be so harsh or snobby, uptight... what is the word for it?
Just everyone take a chill pill please. There's no need to be a snot about it.
