Ok, so this is pretty amazing, regardless. Truly, regardless of everything else. I am on the last chapter.
Everything is fixable. I'm going to just keep getting this out of my head. I will figure out what to do with all the plot holes later.
Update: 8:46pm: another scene done. 192 words. Gee, I swear the ending scenes made sense when I made up the scene cards. Well, at this rate (hidden blessing of such truncated scenes), it's not much work to revise at least
