"Book as event" has certainly creeped back in. Also I had't truly finished the last scene.
I added another paragraph but have no idea how to transition to the next scene. Also MC needs to talk to her friend and explain what happened. And then there needs to be a REASON why she goes to next scene. not just that she's nosey.
I'm adding another scene: transition scene. I'm pretty sure I will be losing some of the other scenes. They belong in another book I think.
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