(6:07pm): Made some good edits during lunch today to my troubled scene. It is a little less of an info dump now.
I've got a lot of work left to do on it but I'm going to try and get it to revised form tonight.
I'll update soon.
(7:45pm) Woot- one troubled scene done! It's still a bit rough. I'll probably take another pass at it tomorrow.
(8:06pm) I feel too tired to attempt another scene. Headed off for some reading...
